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Kellyn87 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@01:10Well do keep up the good work! I wish I can pull off something like this maybe in a few years if im lucky.
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RadenWA Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student General Artist
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KaiHitanji Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Writer
@00:02But still, you did great :D
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RadenWA Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student General Artist
@00:44No, but really that's the only thing it does. Falling XD

If you really like it I can upload it tho.
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Rafael-Domination Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
@00:55If you say so, good sir. T__T
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Music is from www.purple-planet.com

For those of you who're still patiently watching me wondering when will I upload new stuff, for those of you who almost lost interest in me thinking "Dang this guy's probably disappeared".

Here's a little thing I made (school told me to), featuring everything I made ever since the first time I decided to go animation. Hopefully this can quench your thirst of my existence.

Included is a sneak peek of my 6-minutes long graduation film, due to be finished by November.

Well, that's like just 2 more weeks to go. Better disappear again now.

Oh yeah I made Tumblr and Vimeo but really I might not be using it much :(
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From your comment and what I seen in your reel I am assuming you want to go into animation?
I want to point out I should not be asking this it should be very clear to me in your demo reel what you want to do.

Your opening should have your name and contact info
Be that a phone number or your professional e-mail account, it should just be a simple tittle card same goes for the ending
Tumbler and DA is fine to have as your website but you should make yourself a professional one as well so you can have a space that just features your work and no one else's.

As for the demo reel like I said before it is not clear to me that you want to be an animator, you have VFX stuff in the reel and what looks like 3D models you made
That the sort of stuff you can put in your resume saying you can do, it but if your goal is to be an animator I wouldn't feature it in your reel.
As for your animation it rather inconstant throughout your reel from bad, okay and very well done.
Rule of thumb you want to feature your 3-4 best pieces of animation you don't need to show everything you have done just your best work. and you generally want to put it first the people who are looking at your demo reel have to look through 100's if you don't grab their attention right away they are not going to bother looking at the rest of it. They also want it to be short, under a minute best ball park it around 50 seconds.
I know it;s a lot to take into consideration, but if you want to stand out among the thousands this is a good way to do it.
And a lot of your animation is strong, you just need to show it off better and not have it mixed in with all this other stuff.
if you really want to do 2D animation, you should look at people who do 2D animation for a living see their demo reels, websites and such though keep in mind they're professionals so they will have a lot more to their demo reel than you. Since your just starting out you want to keep short, sweet and attention garbing.
Hopes this helps you out :D
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rjayco Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
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THIS. This is why I like your style. Whether it be animation or drawing, this complication shows why you are a great artist and hence why in my opinion I see future success in this for you. Great job and keep it up.
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RadenWA Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you.
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InBetweenMemories Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Well, I'm sure most haven't forgotten about you. And take your time! Life is lifey after all.
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RadenWA Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Haha I wish I know how to do time
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Kellyn87 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice job! This is a very nice video! I wish I can do something like this.
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RadenWA Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
:aww:
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Kellyn87 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@01:10Very neat!
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RadenWA Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
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Kellyn87 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@01:10Well do keep up the good work! I wish I can pull off something like this maybe in a few years if im lucky.
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Net-Wanderer Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
I somehow really like this and it's probably because of the composition and scene selections, it's very much active and lively : ) At the most of it I really enjoyed it and loved alot of part in the short show :D


I'm not completely sure what this will be for overall - whether it is for a showcase of all your year work or a professional presentation for future placements after your graduation. Since you requested critique too and I happened to had read the only one as well, I actually don't entirely agree with it, so I thought I should write something here too...

Anyways, in my honest opinion, part of the critique's right if it was for a professional presentation because the overall showcase seems more generalized (or for enjoyment) than having a particular focus on the quality of a finished production. The whole entire critique is not accurate to me though, because this piece however also shows you do have passion and see the joys in making animation like from the small facial transitions of the cat and other various details I saw.

There are also alot of special effects too and I believe because that these are mostly automated or generated from programs, they are usually not well credited as part of your animation skills, although it still demonstrates your understanding and that you can still work these features on the side.

So in that area, I think too it would just need to be revised and require some tidying that it brings out the quality of a finished production instead.


Outside all that, I think this is a graduation film to show everything you did over the years, and everything people do in your animation course as part of an exhibition instead (Which that critique is in the wrong place). And that, I think this is a pretty perfect piece for it, because overall, I really enjoyed it :D
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